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April 7, 2009
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the best yaoi comic ever: [link] if you don't check it, then you are a loser xD
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the best yaoi comic ever: [link] if you don't check it, then you are a loser xD
it's in this link : [link]
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the best yaoi comic ever: [link] if you don't check it, then you are a loser xD
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the best yaoi comic ever: [link] if you don't check it, then you are a loser xD
- The action goes too fast. At least for the scenes where they're all sad about the breakup (there's few tension in between the separation and the get-together. That feeling I get could be because the drawing style you're using is more comical than... well, drama-ish.)
- There are some typos d: no one can escape those thought.
-The painting and the drawing has improved :3 now just train a bit more on perspective (or if you're just doing it for fun, plan the panels so you don't have to have too much trouble drawing it)
Guess that's it! xD I have to ask for your opinion too once I start my own.
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